AS Media: October 2013

Friday, 4 October 2013

LIIAR Analysis Peer Feedback

1.) They have completed their work to a high standard, it looks like they have spent a lot of time presenting it and making sure they get all the right information on it.

2.) I don’t think there is anything to improve on as it is already at a high standard

3.) I think they have presented all the information really well and made sure that the information they have got is accurate.

1. The analysis is to a very high standard, it is clear they have put a lot of time and effort into it. It is set out clearly and professionally which also shows the effort put into it.

2. They could maybe go into slightly more detail on the ‘Representation’ section of the double page spread, but apart from that, I cannot think of any other improvements.

3. All the points are backed up with detailed explanations and the information is accurate, as well as being clearly set out.

My Response

I feel very happy with my feedback and I will follow how it is set out and the detail as it proves to be a high standard and detailed. Also, I think if I did this again I would improve the ‘Representation’ on my double page spread to make it more detailed and of high standard.