This is my improvement on my previous front cover draft. I have made a few changes to it. I have moved the price, date and issue number so they are with the barcode, as this is more conventional and it looks tidy. Also, I have made more room for feature stories by moving my plug to the top right corner which also makes it stand out more. I have added more feature stories to make the magazine look more interesting as before it was quite empty and didn't look very appealing. I have also changed the text from the main feature story as it sounds better and makes sense as a feature story. I think these changes have made my magazine more realistic and conventional, although I still think it needs more changing to it to make it a final front cover.
